Post by trey on May 14, 2009 2:38:24 GMT -5
I'm still somewhat still writing my script, and hopefully some rainy day will come along where I can knock out much more of it.
But, for anyone who has read it, I'm thinking of changing a big mid-section where instead of Alex/Phillips going up to Canada to meet with one of the terrorist organization's recruiters, he will break one of the terrorists out of prison and have the prisoner take him to headquarters. The only reason I ask because the latter option could be dealt with in a much swifter pace than the meeting with the recruiter, which frankly I think has too much awkward dialogue and story structure that I wish I could make seem more believable except I have incredibly limited [and I mean limited] knowledge as to how people infiltrate terrorist groups. I'm basically making up my own rules or making it so some fact checker could easily legitimize any plot contrivances (not that I plan on taking this to a studio or anything). I just figured I'd see if anybody had any suggestions before I take the time to rewrite that section.
But, for anyone who has read it, I'm thinking of changing a big mid-section where instead of Alex/Phillips going up to Canada to meet with one of the terrorist organization's recruiters, he will break one of the terrorists out of prison and have the prisoner take him to headquarters. The only reason I ask because the latter option could be dealt with in a much swifter pace than the meeting with the recruiter, which frankly I think has too much awkward dialogue and story structure that I wish I could make seem more believable except I have incredibly limited [and I mean limited] knowledge as to how people infiltrate terrorist groups. I'm basically making up my own rules or making it so some fact checker could easily legitimize any plot contrivances (not that I plan on taking this to a studio or anything). I just figured I'd see if anybody had any suggestions before I take the time to rewrite that section.
